Lament for Gondor
i don't write poetry, but for some reason i did the other day. it's lotr-y, though, so i posted it on councilofelrond.com. yes, i'm a dork, but i'm fairly proud of it (both the poem and my dorkiness i guess). if you care, here it is:
http://councilofelrond.com/modules.php?op=modload&name=Clubs&file=index&action=ViewPost&pid=6412
http://councilofelrond.com/modules.php?op=modload&name=Clubs&file=index&action=ViewPost&pid=6412
posted by melilotnfosco | 8:20 PM
10 Comments:
good job - very alliterative.
Go you!
it's supposed to be alliterative. it's rohirric.
and thank you kimmie :)
you know i'm an expert at rohirric poetry.
I've never even heard that word... but yes, very impressive (I even had to read it a couple times:) (except slightly hard on the eyes -- I'm sure Kimberly would agree;)
"slightly hard on the eyes " - says the girl with the blue w/white writing blog. ;P
Rohirric: the culture/language of Rohan
and didder, i would've thought you would be an expert on rohirric poetry seeing as you love eomer so
i know... do you think i should change mine? (although, really, i only think mine's hard when it's longer posts; yours was a short poem!:P)
i've never really had trouble with it
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